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标题:一个北京的哥们，写的托福25分作文，雅思写作他也可以7分，水平不错的，雅思考过8分
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It is easier to raise children nowadays than it was 50 years ago. （反对）

Raising children has always been the burden of their parents not only for mankind but also for other living creatures all over the world, and no matter what time period people live during, it was never an easy task for anybody. Nowadays, many experts claim that it is easier to raise children nowadays because of the improvement of our living standards, however, all other things being equal, it still was easier for parents to raise their children 50 years ago.

Admittedly, the fact that medical cares, health cares as well as other improvements nowadays do make it easier for parents to raise their children. Because when children are in need of medical attentions, society could offer them adequate treatments in order to help them get better, keep healthy and grow stronger whereas 50 years ago, public hospitals were hardly seen near villages not to mention some excellent private sectors. Moreover, all ty
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