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标题:一篇来自专业雅思老师的的批改作文，枪手轻松7.5的，但是苛刻的老师只给了7分，雅思代考 雅思替考
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International community should act immediately to reduce all countries’ consumption of fuels such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Whether or not [ak1] we should cut the consumption of fossil fuels such as gas and oil has been a subject of public concern. Personally, I believe it is wise to reduce the use of gas and oilsuch fuels[ak2] considering the severity of environment issues we are confrontedconfronting [ak3] at the moment. The prevalent environment pollution and ecological deterioration in big cities hashave [ak4] largely attributed largely[ak5] to the uncontrolled use of fossil fuels. Researches indicate that a themajor source of pollutants in the urban area is car exhaust emissionon cars. For instance, Thetheheavy smog that shrouded most part of China in recent years, for example, has raised an alarm about the overly-speedyoverly speedy [ak6] industrialization and over-reliance on fossil fuels. Moreove
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