一个长发美女的雅思写作7分,澳洲雅思枪手,澳洲雅思代考

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4 Feb 2015
Some people think painting and drawing are as important as other subjects, and they should be compulsory in high school education. Agree?

Painting and drawing, despite their benefits to the overall development of students, are often less valued than other academic subjects such as Chinese and Math. While some people suggest that painting and drawing should be required courses for high school students, I believe they should be listed as elective coursesinstead.

Undoubtedly, drawing and painting classes nurture the overall development of children. are playing important roles in nurturing and developing children’s overall qualities. For one thing, it is universally recognized that learning drawing and painting develops is beneficial to teenagers’ observation ability, imagination, and creativityamong students. Such abilities are essential to improvement of academic performance and competitiveness at work. which are all essential in improving students’ academic score and future competitiveness at work. For another, immersion to being immersed in an artistic environment enhances students’ appreciation of helps students enhance their taste for art and beauty and allows them to have a better aesthetic value, thereby recognizing the beauty that surrounds them. to appreciate beauty around them.

In spite of the advantages of learning drawing and painting, we have to admit that it is not wise to make it a compulsory course considering the tight schedule of high school students. As thepriority of high school students should be enhancing their cognitive skills and academic scores, they do not have enough time and energy for art courses. Likewise, people judge a student by their academic scores, not their artistictalents; thus, the inessentiality of requiring every students to take such course. which are advised to be developed earlier in childhood.

In conclusion, without saying that drawing and painting are not important, students should take their academic study as priority with art courses as electivesonly. After all, not every student hasthe potentialor interest to become painters.

(Words: 249)

HI, how are you?

Your command of the English language is quite admirable, but you have a tendency to be wordy and unnecessarily use defining clauses. Remember that there are other ways of reaching 250 words, you do not need to be wordy to do so. You only have to add more interesting ideas but still use fewer words.

Meanwhile, you are 1 word short of 250 words. Keep note of that.




Painting and drawing, despite their benefits to the overall development of students, are often less valued than other academic subjects such as Chinese and Math. While some people suggest that painting and drawing should be required courses for high school students, I believe they should be listed as elective courses instead.

Undoubtedly, drawing and painting classes nurture the overall development of children. For one thing, it is universally recognized that learning drawing and painting develops observation ability, imagination, and creativity among students. Such abilities are essential to improvement of academic performance and competitiveness at work. For another, immersion to an artistic environment enhances students’ appreciation of aesthetic value, thereby recognizing the beauty that surrounds them.

In spite of the advantages of learning drawing and painting, we have to admit that it is not wise to make it a compulsory course considering the tight schedule of high school students. As thepriority of high school students should be enhancing their cognitive skills and academic scores, they do not have enough time and energy for art courses. Likewise, people judge a student by their academic scores, not their artistic talents; thus, the inessentiality of requiring every students to take such course.

In conclusion, without saying that drawing and painting are not important, students should take their academic study as priority with art courses as electives only. After all, not every student has the potential or interest to become painters.

ADD MORE IDEAS TO MAKE IT REACH 250 WORDS.
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